No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of either moving or staying in the same place during each one's life. If I were forced, I would definitely select transfer from place to place instead of stay at the same location. It is my firm belief moving has many pros in each person's character for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, moving gives recent opportunities in many aspects of life like jobs which produce new chances to enhance your life. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. five year ago, I was working in Amman for one year, at this time I acquired new experiences in my field's work, so I got a new chance to move to another country which is Qatar. On top of that, In this new journy I got boost in my salary, also I built a new experience. Consequently, after working two years in qatar, a new opportunity came to me, which is moving to Dubai with higher salary and raise in my relations.
Secondly, be a mobile person means making new relationships with other people which helps in recognize more cultures and civilizations. Drawing from my own experience. Back to the same example above, when I was in Qatar, I met numerous number of people from different countries especially at that time was World Cup which located at the same place where I live . As a results, I made new realtions with friends and they always tell me about their life in their countries which makes me have valualbe information about many countries. Moreover, After moving to Dubai, I was surprised with these sophesticated buildings, streets and entertanment facilites, so I rent a apartment in a tower wich has an awesome view in the ocean and on the city. All these experiements in my life made me a person who love move from country to country to acquire new knowledge about the world. Eventually, I got a new offer to work at Spain, but I still need more thinking about it.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that moving is the best choice for everyone. This is because it offer new opportunites each time to make advanced progress and aid to make new relations with other people from various cultures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61194029851 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6801052215 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544776119403 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3853737732 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.058823529 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6470588235 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14734271598 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513276077637 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449649646668 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933577297793 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323257734434 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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