Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to relax through watching a film and reading a book than doing physical exercises?
In the contemporary world, people might face several problems which lead them to feel more stressed in their daily life. As time moves forward, new methods and strategies are developed by psychologists to overcome this issue. The controversial question which arises here is whether watching a movie and reading a book makes a person relax or just doing physical exercises is good enough to get rid of stress. It is my firm conviction that physical exercises are more beneficial for relaxing rather than just sitting and watching a film or reading a book. There are several reasons to support my idea, two of which will be aptly explored in the following.
First noteworthy reason is that, psychologically speaking, there is a connection between one's mind and body. When people try to exercise as a daily routine, they actually expose their minds to a situation of relaxation. Not only does their body feel more active and fresh, but also their minds get relaxed. In other words, if someone breaths fresh air and keeps himself active by a physical exercise, his heart pumps the blood better and the mind receives oxygen saturated blood, which makes it better for the mind to work properly. Thus, he feels energetic and relaxed.
Secondly, if I want to mention another compelling reason why I have chosen this idea, I should bring up the fact that each individual feeling is contributed to his sleep time and quality. To make it clear, it is believed that when people do physical exercises, by the end of the day, they can have a better sleep. Their muscles are exhausted enough that they need a good rest at night, so it helps them to sleep better at night, by the next morning, they feel more energetic. Taking myself as an example, when I usually go for a walk in the afternoon and exercise, I am more likely to sleep at the night rather than surfing the internet by my phone or having a long chat with my friends on social apps, which makes me sleep later than I expected to. As a result, I feel better the next they and more relaxed for my ongoing jobs. Thus, this is a good way to relax than sitting for a long time and watching a movie that makes me feel a bit exhausted.
In short, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that doing physical exercises is much better than watching films and reading books to get relaxed. Also, it can be healthier. However, that was a story in a nutshell; actually, there are other reasons and examples, challenging the claim, which are not mentioned above. Finally, it is suggested that although watching movies and reading books are great for everyone, people should allocate more of their time doing exercises, like yoga, which benefits them more than the other things.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 90, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...speaking, there is a connection between ones mind and body. When people try to exerc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, i feel, in short, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2253.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 479.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70354906054 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53092414601 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501043841336 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 697.5 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7277992228 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.65 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.95 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233983306975 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744381274158 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103052283248 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160461096357 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856971441203 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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