Do you agree or disagree?
It’ s better to relax through watching a film and reading a book than doing physical exercises?
To begin with, reading books and watching the film can help people feel relaxed.
First of all, reading books can make people’s bodies feel relaxed. When people tend to read the book, they can primarily choose a cleaner environment and quieter atmosphere. Then, they can also sit down on the sofa or bed when they are ready to read a book for a long time. During the process of reading, people can gradually immerse in the attractive plots of books in a prefect circumstance. After a long time reading without doing other things, people will not only absorb abundant knowledge, but also gradually relieve people’s physical stresses during the process of sitting and resting. In the end, people will feel relaxed when they end the reading.
Moreover, watching the film can make people’s mentalities feel relaxed. When people tend to watch some of their favorite films, they can choose to watch with their friends. During the process of watching, people can have lots of interesting and funny discussions about the plots in the movies. Exchanging amusing ideas and statements, people will gradually divert their mind from heavier pressures. Not only that, when people are seeing some touching plots that are very similar to some realities in their daily life, people will also feel comfortable and relaxed. In the end, people will feel relaxed when they finish their watching. Therefore, it is logical to say that reading books and watching the film can make people feel relaxed.
In addition, doing some exercises cannot help people feel relaxed.
First of all, doing some exercises will bring too much physical stress to people.
After long time working, most of people will feel tired and weary. When people still do some drastic exercises, such as long distance-running, basketball, and ping-pong, they will waste lots of energies, which may be beyond their bodies’ extent of bearing. After drastic exercising, people’s bodies might feel pain and uncomfortable, making people cannot feel relaxed, even more tried and weary. Hence, doing some exercises will make people’s bodies bear lots of stresses.
Hence, it is logical to say that doing some exercises cannot help people feel relaxed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 26, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ss to people. After long time working, most of people will feel tired and weary. When people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, in addition, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 9.8082437276 234% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19832402235 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48587815722 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45530726257 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3306813357 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.619047619 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0476190476 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7619047619 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156888507563 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734284896411 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578615009162 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125089438815 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388088336367 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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