Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed materials such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is a long debate over which source should be use for the research work. Some proponent of the convential way to research by using printed books and articles. However, I think it is better to use internet to do research. I feel this way for the following reasons. First, internet is very convienent to use. Another reason is, vast amount of information is available over the internet.
To begin with, internet is an immensely convenient source to do research. To be more specific, everything from all over the world can be access over the internet which means distant is not the problem anymore. However, in order to find printed material books peoeple have to go from place to place. On the other hand, on internet every type of book, articles and other abstracts are available on the websites which makes work eaiser to do. For example, when I was in final year of graduation I have to made an assignment on the chemical unique molecule entity. For this reason, we have to go to the library of chemistry department to get the book, which is 10 miles away from our department of pharmacy. So, me and other groups member decided to get the access of the book over the internet in order to save our time. this would not have been possible without the internet. Therefore, I couldn't agree more to use the internet for research work.
In addition, internet contains huge amount of details and updated information. However, printed materials take time to get the information updated and to be available in the markets. This is no longer a problems for the internet users which means they can access to the vast and updated information readily. To exemplify, when me and my friend studied for our lisence exam we need to do some research over the sources for pharmacy exams. we looked for the books and other printed lisences books. The information mentioned in those books are too brief and vague. It was too difficult for us to study from these materials as none of the information was detailed. As a consequnce, we did not pass the exam. This would not have happened if we have use the website of medscape for the exam on the internet which contain detailed and comprehensive information.
In conclusion, I m of the opinion that it is better to use internet over printed materials because it is readily accesable and all has vast amount of information about anything.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, therefore, as to, for example, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1968.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73076923077 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62047016875 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 634.5 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1088345276 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.72 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.64 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264197532211 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908388018018 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866683470161 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203429394551 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845401758762 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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