Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is easier for people to maintain good health than before.
Nowadays, a lot of people have various choices for good health. However, it is so controvertible for people to easy to maintain their good health than before. In my view, people can keep their good health compared with in the past. They obtain bountiful notifications such as advertisements for heath, facilities for caring about their health, television programs for continuing g their good health,
To begin with, people keep their health advance by the advertisements for caring about their health. In the present time compared with the past time, there are plenty of advertisements for health in many places such as in public transportations, internets, commercials from television programs. The situations where people have to take care of their heath certainly are enormous numbers. In addition, it causes them opportunities to maintain improving their health.
Secondly, the buildings for health are easy to establish boosting people’s health. In the past time, people did not gain situations where they were able to exercise. Nevertheless, there is a large number of chances for them to play sports and do running now. For instance, gyms provide people who want to be healthy person many options such as yoga, aerobic, swimming, and so on. They definitely can select the exercises even if they profoundly concern about decisions. Thus, their health more easily keeps them advanced than in the past.
Finally, keeping the good health of people is acquired by television programs for health. While television companies select their productions without heath in the past, people can see the programs about how to take care of their health. Take myself an example, I often could saw comedies or news, but I did not have the opportunities to watch the TV about how to manage your good health. On the other hand, unquestionably, I am capable of watch television programs about how many people die by diseases or to make our body more strong. As a result, it is easy for people to sustain their improved health.
To sum up, nowadays, people can more easily preserve their health than in the past. I surely believe that they definitely hold occasions such as advertisements for heath, facilities for caring about their health, television programs for continuing g their good health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, in my view, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1329787234 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82698129162 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468085106383 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4014312782 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.45110844103 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284899140732 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122497938679 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776846788898 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208357818163 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589262411445 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.