Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Since the nowadays world is developed by leaps and bounds, many things happened and change rapidly that everyone should focus on everything around the world to avoid trouble burned people's life.
Some skeptical argued that things are too myriads that people cannot handle and deal with everything, so people should only know about events surrounding themselves. Just like people are too busy to work and teach their children that the other country's event is not important to them that the most important thing is to sustain their livelihood. Also, the other country's events probably won't influence their life, so why they should know what happened around the world and why they should know how serious the event will probably affect the world.
However, the statement is typically wrong that the world nowadays is all connected together that each event might influence another such as the butterfly effect. As the recent major clamorous, the COVID-19, around the world make most people bear in trouble and lose their job to worried about their life. Since most European didn't consider the COVID-19 is not as terrible as others thinking, also it started from China as the pole apart from them, they consider the events will not affect their citizens' life. If the European government can realize how horrible the COVID-19 will be and to know about everything in the world, most people might escape from this terrible nightmare.
Since worlds are all connected together that people should focus on the news to follow the event around the world. Just like Apple announces the new iPhone and the new iMac will influence the stock to fluctuate in Taiwan. Because Apple is a big and famous company that everything might influence the world easily, just as the founder of Apple, Steven Jobs died to cause the world in a deep mood and cause the stock is terrible. Besides, the U.S. presidential election also affects the world's economy and government since whether Trump or Biden win the election, it must bring a huge effect on the whole society.
Like the above example, it is very important to focus on every event around the world no matter how the event will straightforwardly influence their life or not, the butterfly effect must make the event influence every people' life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...d about their life. Since most European didnt consider the COVID-19 is not as terribl...
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Line 3, column 681, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ht escape from this terrible nightmare. Since worlds are all connected together that ...
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Line 4, column 485, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
... presidential election also affects the worlds economy and government since whether Tr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, apart from, such as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97375328084 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32251877384 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475065616798 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.9232463568 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.769230769 100.406767564 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3076923077 20.6045352989 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230394581759 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917268132398 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517810542633 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139423191006 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353987738811 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 11.7677419355 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.