Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
To many people's opinion, the celebrity's opinion is much more useful to youngster than elders. However, it is super wrong and superficial that the opinions of celebrities are all very important to young people and old ones.
Many people believe celebrities' opinion might more influence to youngsters since most young people will blindfolded to believe everything from their idol. Just like in the Korea, the idols are their super star and cannot be blamed in those teenagers mind. Sometimes those idols' opinion might be helpful than their parents. If those children are confuse in their path of their life, the idols' opinion will be more important than their teacher's advice. Also, some child might not easily to listen to their parents, but the animated actor's words might easily make them listen. As the above example, those people, believe the opinions of celebrities will useful to youngsters, consider their theory will as strong as a stone.
Nonetheless, those people's believe is wrong that most elders will easily listen to celebrities' opinion either since they don't have such high intelligence and searching technical that they will listen to the expert's advice. Such as they might listen to the authoritative doctor's opinion to eat more medicine to make their health better no matter how the doctor doesn't know the elder's health that the medicine might harm their body. Besides, the elder will easily to listen the politicians' advise to make their decision such as vote a president that the elder might not know the president's policy and the president's promise. To vote in blinded just because those elder believe those celebrities' opinion.
As the aforementioned suggest claims that all people from young to old might easily to listen to other's opinions in blinded that the most important thing is to stand their opinion stronger and analyze those opinion and make the right decision by themselves expect by others. Also, celebrities such as famous entertainers, experts and politicians should remember their opinions and advice will easily change other's mind and distortion the media that they must think more than normal people before they issue a statement.
Through those argument, not only youngsters will listen celebrities' opinion, also elders do. Therefore, the most important thing is not to blindfolded to believe anything that people should analyze and make the decision my their own.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 105, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'blindfold'
Suggestion: blindfold
...youngsters since most young people will blindfolded to believe everything from their idol. ...
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Line 2, column 272, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'idols'' or 'idol's'?
Suggestion: idols'; idol's
...n those teenagers mind. Sometimes those idols opinion might be helpful than their par...
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Line 2, column 345, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'confused'.
Suggestion: confused
...an their parents. If those children are confuse in their path of their life, the idols ...
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Line 2, column 386, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'idols'' or 'idol's'?
Suggestion: idols'; idol's
...onfuse in their path of their life, the idols opinion will be more important than the...
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Line 2, column 672, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f celebrities will useful to youngsters, consider their theory will as strong as ...
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Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...o celebrities opinion either since they dont have such high intelligence and searchi...
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'experts'' or 'expert's'?
Suggestion: experts'; expert's
... technical that they will listen to the experts advice. Such as they might listen to t...
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Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'doctors'' or 'doctor's'?
Suggestion: doctors'; doctor's
... they might listen to the authoritative doctors opinion to eat more medicine to make th...
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Line 3, column 361, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... health better no matter how the doctor doesnt know the elders health that the medicin...
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Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'elders'' or 'elder's'?
Suggestion: elders'; elder's
...o matter how the doctor doesnt know the elders health that the medicine might harm the...
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Line 3, column 476, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...des, the elder will easily to listen the politicians advise to make their decisio...
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Line 3, column 498, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'making'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'advise' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: making
...sily to listen the politicians advise to make their decision such as vote a president...
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Line 3, column 580, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'presidents'' or 'president's'?
Suggestion: presidents'; president's
...ident that the elder might not know the presidents policy and the presidents promise. To v...
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Line 3, column 684, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'celebrities'' or 'celebrity's'?
Suggestion: celebrities'; celebrity's
... just because those elder believe those celebrities opinion. As the aforementioned suggest...
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Line 4, column 202, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this opinion' or 'those opinions'?
Suggestion: this opinion; those opinions
...tand their opinion stronger and analyze those opinion and make the right decision by themselv...
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Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this argument' or 'those arguments'?
Suggestion: this argument; those arguments
...before they issue a statement. Through those argument, not only youngsters will listen celebr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2021.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2087628866 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48358812176 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.427835051546 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 628.2 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0806749296 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.3125 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210334828158 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096899936832 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724576548394 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165257379266 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663713756775 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.