Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
World is changing enormously with the advent of new ideas and concepts. Standard of living is also improving. In order to do that, people are continuously forming new concepts and strategies for their workplace too. According to one method, some people prefer to do a job for three days a week for longer hours as they feel they would get more time for themselves. However, I believe that people would enjoy more if they work for five days a week for shorter hours. I feel this way because they would have enough time to spend with their families on daily basis, they would be less tired by working for shorter hours, and they would have a stable job if they work everyday.
To begin with, it is important for us to get some time for our families. When we work for shorter hours everyday, we would get chance to sit with our children. We can eat dinner together and help our kids in their homework. For example, my dad used come home everyday by 4 in the evening, and we used to go for a walk after he arrived. This way, we had enough time to talk about everything. This helped us to build a very strong bond of love and care. Therefore, I feel that if people work everyday for shorter hours, they would get some time for their families.
In addition, when people work for longer hours continuously, they get exhausted with their work. This would affect their health negatively. For example, one of my friends’ dad used work for longer hours non stop. After a few years, his dad got heart attack, and when they asked a doctor for the cause of it. The doctor said stress was the reason for that heart attack. Then his dad realized that he was working late night non stop, and therefore could not take enough sleep. This made them exhausted and tensed about the work. The long hours at the job was the cause of his stress and heart attack.
Last but not least, when people work daily, they can meet their coworker and bosses daily. This way, their work would be noticed in the presence of other people. This give other people sense that these people are working very hard, and consider them first in order to give a promotion. Furthermore, even though people who work for longer hours, other people may only think that they get many days off per week, and would consider that they work eventually less than the people who work five days per week.
To sum it up, some people like to work three days per week for longer hours, however I believe that I would enjoy more if I work for shorter hour and five days a week because I can get time to spend with my family, live healthy life and have a stable job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 665, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ey would have a stable job if they work everyday. To begin with, it is important for ...
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Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...amilies. When we work for shorter hours everyday, we would get chance to sit with our ch...
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Line 3, column 491, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
.... Therefore, I feel that if people work everyday for shorter hours, they would get some ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, for example, i feel, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2133.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 483.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41614906832 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09906850422 2.67179642975 79% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432712215321 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1767734144 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0384615385 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5769230769 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324951026294 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101002927884 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101599459777 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230780550359 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958231013208 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.39 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.