Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Use specific reasons and example to support answer.
Both does have pro's and cons.if it is just three days a week how long will i have to work for those three days. one cannot work for more than fourteen hours for three days continuously as the brain needs rest. if you work continuously for a very long time your brain stops thinking which in-turns affects your work. you will not be able to give your best when you dont get sufficient rest. Not only brain even your body needs sufficiant amount of food and sleep other wise your health gets deteriorated and you need to take more leaves to get back into shape which your job will not provide every time. Also one does not go to holidays so frequently to get continuous four days. But for people staying away or far from their home go back to their place for the four days and rest or spend time with their families. working for a shorter amount of time is a complete work life balance. you spend sufficient amount of time at work where you give your best and hundred percent percent as so your peers and superiors are happy with it. Once we complete our work we can spend the rest of the time in studying or with family or play to get into shape which ever interest the person. we get a sufficient amount of time for yourself which makes us happy. This makes us to go for work again with a smile on your face. even if we want to go on a holiday every job gives a certain amount of leaves to take where one can plan a good holiday or spend the leaves in case of any emergency. so with the above examples i prefer working for shorter hours for five days a week rather than long hours and three days a week.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.18709677419 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.02611462624 2.67179642975 76% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474193548387 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 400.5 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4292929232 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7142857143 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.21428571429 5.45110844103 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374091318676 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145952827353 0.076458572812 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107440281956 0.0737576698707 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.374091318676 0.150856017488 248% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 10.9000537634 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.26 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 86.8835125448 35% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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