To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
characteristic of a society is mostly a broader sense of a living things being together. Without a group of people a society cannot be formed. Establishing a relationship among people makes a society. Its all about friendship, intimacy among people to make the life simpler. when in need the nearest one to help you are your neighbours of the same society so maintaining cordial relationships among everyone is a good sign of a happy society.
firstly, society is not only in the cities but they are located every place be it a small town or big cities. Its not necessary that to understand the characteristics of a society one must study its major cities. For example small villages are like a humongous family. they are just a bunch of countable person who know one another very well. they celebrate festivals together. they share their happiness and sadness with each other. The heritage of a village is pretty rich. A city is nothing but a group of villages and towns combined together.
Nowadays in a city people rarely interact with each other. many people are so busy with their works that they forget friends and family. To make a society better one must know their needs and problems. For example In cities people prefer apartment for various reasons like security, and garden its just like a mini society people are so busy with their day to day lives there are very less interactions with their neighbours so they know the problems of the society less when a problem occurs they call a meeting for few minutes and resolve it. their is no friendly chit chat or parties among each other.
one can understand the problems facing in a society by studying both cities and villages. like for example there are so many villages where children does not have education because of lack of school. they dont have proper food to eat or electricity for their daily chorus. many villages even face water problems. they have to walk miles and miles to get water for their daily needs. To make a better society one must satisfy their primary needs. similarly even in cities there are many problems like improvement of drainage. And one of the major problems in cities is traffic control as the population of cities are more when compared to village there is a lot of traffic. so when the traffic is controlled its runs more smoothly.
Finally, by the above statements we can drive that to understand the characteristics of a society one must not only study the major cities but also the minor cities, towns and villages where one can understand the problems and make it a better society to live in. Its simple to update the cities but updating a small towns are much difficult as there are many things which are not developed in small towns and villages and similarly cities can learn the importance of relationships from the small towns and villages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, similarly, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2374.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 497.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77665995976 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55409276182 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.418511066398 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 765.9 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 71.423424649 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8620689655 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1379310345 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.48275862069 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173259808253 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454116707988 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571754548015 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102087722363 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231108533533 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.38706741573 82% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.