To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
It is a well-known fact that population in major cities is far greater than rural areas. With this vast population comes various lifestyles and culture. The prompt suggests that the characteristics of a society can be found out by studying the cosmopolitan region. In my opinion, the prompt is not entirely true as most of the cultural and traditional roots will be associated with a countries rural regions for the following few reasons.
To begin with, the population growth is increasing rapidly at an unpredictable rate. Vast majority of today’s populace prefer to live in these metropolitan cities which play a crucial role in development software industry. Due to the industrialization many foreigners who are alien to the local culture move from their homeland and settle in the major cities. To accommodate these foreigners, government tries to adapt and therefore resulting in deviation from their traditional roots.
Secondly, the countries cultural heritage and traditions can be best described by the stone carvings, temples and cultural sites which provide information about the religion, linguistics and traditions of the local denizens. It is more likely that the people residing in rural areas abide by their traditions and not the people in the metropolitan cities where they are continuously influenced by a different culture. For instance, Charminar, a monument in a rustic locality provides more information about the history of the Mughal rulers than any museum in the major cities.
Thirdly, with growing influence of technology and urbanization several cultural heritage sites are being demolished to provide space for the development of factories. These primary sites provide information about the countries ancient civilization which was never recorded in history books. For instance, Golconda in TamilNadu, a cultural heritage site was destroyed to make more room for the adjacent Cognizant software industries.
In conclusion, many cultural heritage sites are being replaced by modern industries. Hence in determining the cultural roots of a locality the study of rural areas should be given highest priority
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- To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In deve 50
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 383, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a country' or simply 'countries'?
Suggestion: a country; countries
...aditional roots will be associated with a countries rural regions for the following few rea...
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Line 9, column 86, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...re being replaced by modern industries. Hence in determining the cultural roots of a ...
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Line 9, column 175, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'given the highest'.
Suggestion: given the highest
...lity the study of rural areas should be given highest priority
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 329.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54103343465 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06576505676 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534954407295 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8971489931 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.9375 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 5.21951772744 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0965874510718 0.243740707755 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336407618941 0.0831039109588 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0200764245383 0.0758088955206 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0543654341637 0.150359130593 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212807546623 0.0667264976115 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 48.8420337079 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 12.1743820225 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.1639044944 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.