Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
All governments consume their efforts on several facilities such as education, transportation, accessibility to internet etc.All these things used by countries people and they want to achieve these quickly and effectively.And, If governments apply these positively, their durability would last a long period.
First of all, we should think which one is the most important and necessity for their communities.There are different factors could affect their decisions such as ages, living conditions, economic features.For example, some places where young adults living, there must be free internet connections because young adults want that.
Lets think internet accesses, internet is the most usable in the world.Whenever and wherever all people connect to it.Especially early ages people use that much than olders.We can think that internet is social tool for some individual,because they often talking on apps on the internet such as facebook,instagram etc.Also, they play online game on internet.When people play on internet their connection should be fast, if the connection slow their comfortabilities decrease.
Now, lets consider public transportations, that matter is much about economic growth of country.Transportatio is necessity for people who travel between places, and that is the great important factories which import or export their products place to place or country to country.So, countries transportation ways such like roads,railroads must be in good conditions, if not the government have to increase these conditions up.
In conclusion, I think these two facts are equal important.All goverments decisions should follow their countries wonderings, and they should think which statement is necessary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 251.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90836653386 4.8611393121 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.52053749011 2.67179642975 132% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609561752988 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.1344086022 248% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.821398551 48.9658058833 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 296.6 100.406767564 295% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.2 20.6045352989 244% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.8 5.45110844103 290% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124705190541 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687296803799 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0205253420065 0.0737576698707 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0687296803799 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205253420065 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.5 11.7677419355 268% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.27 58.1214874552 21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 10.1575268817 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.89 10.9000537634 164% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.01818996416 129% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 10.002688172 205% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.0537634409 219% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.247311828 234% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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