Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than It is to make new friends. Use specific reasons and example to support your answer.
As it is known for all of us, we are as a human being need to live with others in communities and since living lonely is so difficult, people tend to make friends. Most people believe keeping old friends is more important than to make a new one. However, others disagree with them. The writing below discusses different aspects of that point of view.
On one hand, people believe it is crucial to keep old friends; There are several reasons for that. First, each person has a lots in common with old friends in terms of opinions,beliefs and etc. They know each other well and can spend much pleasure time together and feel happiness. Second, due to statement that "the more you know some one well, the more you can help him/her"; old friends can count on each other more because they know their characteristic carefully and better than new friends. like, for instance, when something wrong happens to me or I get in to trouble, my old friends help me to rescue from struggling with that problem.
On the other hand, others claim that making new friends is a chance to know different people and so led to get familiar with verity of personalities, cultures, customs. They believe it is logical to communicates with others by making new friends not only in own country but also in abroad or whole over the world. It can be an opportunity to learn about diverse languages and cuisines or recipes of special food that belong to special regions in the world. So, these new friends can help to experience these new feeling like tasting some new food or learn new or even hard language.
To sum up,I think although keeping old friends is so important, both keeping old friends and making new one can be a good strategy for each person because both have great advantages that no one cannot ignore them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, well, for instance, i think, you know, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.675 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50779254276 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5375 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7091073724 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.857142857 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267755132242 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993026047001 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775472854563 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171597191478 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373907369891 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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