Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Travelling is such a common way to spend spare time or feel refresh or relax after a wide time of being at work. Although, there are some people that prefer to travel to foreign countries, I personally opt to travel in my own country due to these reasons that will be discussed below.
First, for a person who wants to experience travelling, it is crucial to start from his own country first. That is, as a member of a society of his country, it is logical to be sure that whether he travels all of significant places in his country or not. In addition, the advantage of that point is that, travelling in the own country would be easier especially if the traveler is not expert enough or even is an amateur. That is due in the fact that the traveler has a lot in common with inhabitants. Like for instance, same formal language, same currency or even similar culture. So, it will be more convenience for travelers and lead them to enjoy more from their trip.
Second, If someone travels in his own country, it will cause more trades than the past. Not only that has a great benefit for the local people, but also it plays a critical role on the country in terms of economically or even socially in some cases. To be more exact; the increasing in the rates of trades lead to economical profit successfully and one of the positive consequence of that is providing more suitable jobs for people. So, people can have a great chance to raise the economical and educational status of their lives.
To sum up, I believe that people can travel to foreign countries but travelling inside their own country should be in their priority. It can help their own country and their people in terms of raising the economical status to prepare important demand for people such as education or housing and also can improve the rate of tourism industrial.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 402, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ositive consequence of that is providing more suitable jobs for people. So, peopl...
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Line 13, column 206, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...nd their people in terms of raising the economical status to prepare important demand for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, even so, for instance, in addition, such as, in some cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60120845921 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5452271224 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510574018127 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3400532172 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.785714286 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309876818887 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113418179106 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773590959967 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192130359395 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383795118492 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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