Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Now a days, friends are important in our life. I agree with the statement that it is important to keep old friends then to make new friends. I feel this way for two reasons which i explained in following essay.
First of all without friends life is incomplete. old friends are more loyal nd motivated because they know every weak point of you. For example few months ago I made new friend she is very talkative nd beautiful I felt that she can help me a lots in every aspect of my life but one day i did some mistake in speaking english all classmates start laughing at me nd my new also start laughing aloud i felt so shameful At that time my old friend come nd encourage me nd she shout up at all students in the class. she was only one who stand along my side because of her i feel proud nd happy.In this way old friends are more important than new friends.
Secondly, old friends know about your all secrets they always give positive to u. Whenever i feel sad nd worried about some problem my friend always give positive thoughts to me.because i always start overthinking when i am not feeling good. For example, In my bds final year exam am so worried bd fearful due to exams i felt that i did'nt pass the exams nd i overthink in negative way then my friend come she give me a lecture about it nd told me if u do a lots of hardwork how can u failed in the exams. However, my new friend was not worried about this she was busy in her own work.
In conclusion, best friends are more important than new friends. old friends are loyal and motivating for us they always give positive energy to us. they know all secrets nd weak points of us.friends are important in everyone's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2554517134 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34713237504 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489096573209 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.8999443826 48.9658058833 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5714285714 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286954637158 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141187314454 0.076458572812 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151585769199 0.0737576698707 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219384488749 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118822408024 0.0645574589148 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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