It has been a controversial issue that whether governments should spend money on internet access or on public transportation. As far as I am concerned, I believe it is more crucial for governments to invest more money on public transportation, and my reasons are as follows.
First and foremost, the most important mission for a government is to boost country's economy, and spending more money to improve public transportation is profitable. For example, in my country, the high speed train was built few years ago because our government found it was not only profitable, but many people had to spend long time traveling from Taipei, the capital city, to Kaushuing. Also, in the past two years, the majority of foreign travelers would take the high speed trains to play around Taiwan. As the financial report mentioned, the the high speed trans brings a tremendous revenue for our government.
In addition, governments all want earn a high reputation, and putting more efforts on public transportation will make more citizens support governments. I still remember when I was in senior high school, I lived in the suburb of Taipei. There was no any subway stations near my home, so I had to take a one-hour bus to my school. After I went to university, our new government noticed citizens' demand, and started the construction of the new subway stations. Many people felt grateful for what our new government did, and even vote for the party accordingly.
Last but not least, governments all want their countries are competitive around the world, and the modern public transportation is an indicator of whether a country is competitive. For instance, China had built many innovative international trains to eastern Europe in order to show its competency on transportation. On the other hand, nowadays most of countries have set up their internet access, so there is no need for a country to pursue the better internet access so as to prove the success of a country.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that governments should focus more on public transportation. After all, governments hope to do things profitable, get high reputation, and make their countries great.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'playing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: playing
...velers would take the high speed trains to play around Taiwan. As the financial report ...
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Line 3, column 545, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...wan. As the financial report mentioned, the the high speed trans brings a tremendous re...
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Line 3, column 545, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...wan. As the financial report mentioned, the the high speed trans brings a tremendous re...
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Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ived in the suburb of Taipei. There was no any subway stations near my home, so I ...
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Line 7, column 346, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the countries') or simply say ''most countries''.
Suggestion: most of the countries; most countries
...sportation. On the other hand, nowadays most of countries have set up their internet access, so t...
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Line 7, column 470, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ry to pursue the better internet access so as to prove the success of a country. In c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, so, still, after all, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0782122905 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07340264428 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536312849162 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8747990349 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.625 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247653235274 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087821016651 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836781969501 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153725976188 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777466268747 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.