Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to
understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts. Use specific reasons and
examples to support your answer.
Education and ability to learn things has played an important role in human evaluation. It is the key factor to human to become the dominant animal in the planet. With advance current we have formal system for education; schools universities and so forth. I believe that, these institution should encourage students to understand ideas and concept, rather than learn them as facts.
First and foremost, understanding concepts and ideas improve the creativity. It encourage students to do innovations. For example, when I was at high school our science teacher encourage students to understand concepts and ideas. Because of that, our students tried to do science projects and did experiments to understand concepts. Many participated innovation competitions and won places. This was all due to we understood the concept behind the facts we learn and apply them in real life.
Secondly, it helps to enhance the appetite toward subjects. If we do not understand things we learn then, we tend to hate the subject. Moreover, when we try to learn them as fact situation become worse. For instance, in my primary school. I did not understand concepts and ideas taught in mathematics. Therefore I hate that subject and I score very low marks. However, In high school my math teacher helped me to understand the concepts and from then math is my favorite subject.
Last but not least, understanding concepts and ideas is more effective learning technique than learn them as facts. When a student understand a concept then all the related concepts are also become easier to understand. If one tries to learn them as facts then, he or she does not see connection between facts. The final results is he/she has to remember everything separately as independent facts. Moreover, from my personal experience, I realized that when you understand concepts and ideas you can score well in exams. In addition, you feel more confidence about you and the subject. This greatly helpful in practical life.
In sum, students should try to understand ideas and concepts when they learn. This helps students to improve their creativity, to enhance the likeliness toward the subject. Finally it is more efficient that learning them as facts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this institution' or 'these institutions'?
Suggestion: this institution; these institutions
...versities and so forth. I believe that, these institution should encourage students to understand...
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Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'encourages'?
Suggestion: encourages
...ts and ideas improve the creativity. It encourage students to do innovations. For example...
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Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'experiment'
Suggestion: experiment
...ts tried to do science projects and did experiments to understand concepts. Many participat...
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Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ncepts and ideas taught in mathematics. Therefore I hate that subject and I score very lo...
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Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ing technique than learn them as facts. When a student understand a concept then all...
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Line 9, column 174, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ance the likeliness toward the subject. Finally it is more efficient that learning them...
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Line 9, column 232, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... efficient that learning them as facts.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13774104683 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79354599889 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501377410468 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5341832262 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.0740740741 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4444444444 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18518518519 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265958258839 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795446646546 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642371393078 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172718184856 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445249297088 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.