Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays we can't imagine a single day of our life without access of the internet. It has become a crucial part of our life but the public transport system is also necessary to facilitate the transport of average people. I disagree with the statement that government should spend more money to improve internet access than to improve public transportation. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
The first thing that comes to my mind is that all people in a country can't afford their own vehicle. Especially some poor countries like my country can't afford that. They have to use public transport daily. My own experience is a compelling perception in this case. I have to use the public bus daily for going to the office. I don't get enough buses daily. That's why I have to go out at least one hour before my office time. I have to wait a long time. Even sometimes I didn't get a seat on the bus and had to stand for the whole journey. If the government doesn’t spend money to increase the number of transport, people like me will suffer a lot.
In addition, if everyone in the country uses their own vehicle it will increase traffic jams which is one of the greatest problems in our country. Some emergency services like ambulances carrying patients as well as fire service will hamper traffic jams. For instance, last year my aunt had labor pain and we had to take her to hospital urgently by ambulance but we were stuck in a traffic jam for one hour and she suffered a lot at that time. If the government pays attention to public service, this suffering can be avoided. In addition, the condition of currently available transport is in a miserable condition which has a great risk of causing any road accident. Government should spend money to renovate this vehicle.
Finally, it's clear from the above-mentioned explanation that government should plan to spend money on public transportation too. Because all people can't afford to buy their own vehicle and if they afford it can cause so many problems like a traffic jams. It also can't deny that internet facility is necessary but public transport facility is also required.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, well, at least, even so, for instance, i feel, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72251308901 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64095000405 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507853403141 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3633778125 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4347826087 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6086956522 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5652173913 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243090099002 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713470684725 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108902566064 0.0737576698707 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164916842186 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120510899542 0.0645574589148 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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