Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It was ‎easier to achieve success in the past than it is today.‎

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 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It was ‎easier to achieve success in the past than it is today.‎

In the modern era, Many changes and inventions make numerous differences in comparation to ‎the past. Most of this change have the good effect on my life and make many oppurtunities to ‎proggress in human life. In contrast, with some ideas that tell; achiving the success in the past was ‎easier, in my opinion this isn’t complete idea, because it don’t assumed many of things, I will ‎explain two of them in the below paragraphs.‎

First, Nowdays, the world is witness of the great progress at information tecnologty (IT), IT ‎influance on many aspect of my life such as education, economic, cultural and any other aspects, ‎that these weren’t the past. IT trace give more comfortable in our life and save more money and ‎time for us, with this advantage people could focus on their work and create more free time for ‎more try and more work to achiving to the success. Imagine online shpping and internet llibraries ‎that everyone could order anything quickly and don’t need people go to their places, it save many ‎time of people that give them more time to concentration on their works and be success easier. ‎For example when I was at the collage the online network of the university started to work, then ‎when I was at the dorm I be able to reserved my dinner and studied the artcile in the library with ‎online network. Therefore I had more time for study and practice at the dorm. ‎

Second, Many opportunities create todays that they weren’t before this time, many new places ‎have constructed that people can go to there and use their opportunities. In the economical cases ‎many huge buildings constracted such as malls that they have various function as shopping, ‎gaming, food and etc, it attract many of people everyday, Its ability give people this opportunity ‎that investment to their places and work there and become success eventually. For instance, in ‎near of my home, a comercial complex building constracted and this center have created more ‎than two thousands job opportiunities that give everyone to work there, the investors of this ‎complex center say that their investment became double only during one year. Hence the new ‎opportunites be able to create sharp success for the people. ‎

Finally, even though, some people belive that achiving to the success was easier at the past, In my ‎view, nowdays successful is easier than past, becuase IT proggress create noticable advantage that ‎give the people achive the success easier than past, in addition new places constracted todays that ‎they create further oppurtunities to people. Thereby, nowdays, be successful is easier than past. ‎

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd make many oppurtunities to ‎proggress in human life. In contrast, with some id...
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Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun aspect seems to be countable; consider using: 'many aspects'.
Suggestion: many aspects
...rmation tecnologty IT, IT ‎influance on many aspect of my life such as education, economic,...
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Message: Did you mean 'traces'?
Suggestion: traces
..., ‎that these weren't the past. IT trace give more comfortable in our life and s...
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Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...ork and create more free time for ‎more try and more work to achiving to the success. I...
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Message: Did you mean 'saves'?
Suggestion: saves
...os;t need people go to their places, it save many ‎time of people that give them mor...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...le in the library with ‎online network. Therefore I had more time for study and practice ...
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Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'attracts'?
Suggestion: attracts
... as shopping, ‎gaming, food and etc, it attract many of people everyday, Its ability gi...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...food and etc, it attract many of people everyday, Its ability give people this opportuni...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...ent became double only during one year. Hence the new ‎opportunites be able to create...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, hence, if, second, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2268.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 440.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15454545455 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76211082297 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509090909091 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.139803826 48.9658058833 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 174.461538462 100.406767564 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8461538462 20.6045352989 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 5.45110844103 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1725722116 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744202176256 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877297167045 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135016715793 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107245016679 0.0645574589148 166% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 11.7677419355 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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