Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?‎The government should spend more money onimproving access to the Internet than on publictransportation.‎

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?‎

The government should spend more money on

improving access to the Internet than on public

transportation.‎

In the modern era, internet have an indeniable role in the human’s ‎life, many works doing with internrt and internrt access is the one ‎of indices that is vital for all conteries. Altoght, many of cities and ‎citizens need a network of public transportation, in my opinion ‎spend more money on improving access to the internet is more ‎important. In what follows, I will elaborate on my viewpoint. ‎

The first exquisite reason that I must mention it is; the internet ‎access save more money. When the government spend more money ‎to improve access to the internet and make a further infrastructre ‎in the case of internet, it produce a great opportunity to reduce ‎many casts actually. For example, In the west asian contries like ‎south korea and japan, the government spend more money and ‎investigate to improve the internet access and give to their people ‎higher speed internet access in comparison with the western Asian ‎contires, therefore, their people have cheaper and easier access to ‎the onlone shop and online library. They don’t need travel in the ‎city and dont need going to the place for works, finally, they save ‎more money. ‎

The second reason that I prefer that the spend more money to ‎improving the access to the internet is better is save more time. ‎When you have a good access to the internet and the local network ‎not only yo don’t need go to the outside of home, but also you ‎stay at home and doing other works too. For example, when I was a ‎master student at university, I was at dorm and have a PC with ‎internet connection, Hence, I doing my works like thesis search and ‎reading online book, reserving food, online shop and purchasing books, ‎while, I was at dorm I saw many american liberiaries. My dormitory ‎life was the best period of my life because, I were at dorm and ‎make rest and have a more free time to exercise and improving my ‎english language. ‎

In short, Although, both investigation in transportation and spend ‎money to improve intrnet access are vital, In my view spend more ‎money to improve internet is more importance owing to, the ‎internet access have a great beneficial that reduce people costs and ‎give them more free time and cover many of the usual works. ‎

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: produces
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... a PC with ‎internet connection, Hence, I doing my works like thesis search and ‎...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in short, in my opinion, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95384615385 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7380005374 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492307692308 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.6756501076 48.9658058833 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.0 100.406767564 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5 20.6045352989 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 5.45110844103 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303206071362 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136343344507 0.076458572812 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827124042733 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214182846584 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445108049459 0.0645574589148 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 11.7677419355 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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