Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?‎Telephone has greater influence on people’s lives thantelevision has.‎

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?‎

Telephone has greater influence on people’s lives than

television has.‎

In fact, telephone is a inseparable part of people’s lives nowdays. While, some people believe that ‎television have a great role in people’s lives, in my opinion, phone and smartphone influnce all ‎aspect people’s lives and it is more important than television. The importance of the phones ‎become more than past. We see the using of phones have became more and more. In what ‎follows, I will elaborate on my viewpoint. ‎

The first exquisite reason that I must mention is role of social networks. In the last year progress ‎in the social networks and their applications spread all over the world and world’s people create ‎accounts and became a user of the social networks. Social networks like Facebook, Instagram, ‎Telegram, what’sapp etc. give people the various opportunity such as amusment, chat, share ‎documents, make relationship. This features make smartphone very atrractive and influance ‎people’s lives. To indicate the power of this importance, I have a real example, one of my friend ‎with his Instagram’s account make a relationship with a girl and they have fall a love and married ‎finally, This is a undeniable role of phones. ‎

The second resons that I want explain, is the availibelity of the phone. Nowadays smartphones is ‎producing in small sizes and every body could carry it and using at the any palce such tran, park, ‎conference or party. If you see the people at the every place, you will seen they have a ‎smartphone on their hands. This is not true?! However, the smarthone don’t have positive effect ‎always, It may be a addictive influences. The last report of the International Technology Centere ‎at Berlin University indicate that, not only smartphone not positive influnce on children but also, ‎it make a negative effect on their brains. This center has emphasisd that smartphon’s bad effect ‎related to its availibility. ‎

In the conclusion, althought, both television and phone have undeniable influance on people’s ‎lives, in my viewpoint, the phone has a grater influnce on the people’s lives nowadays. ‎Smartphone with attractive opportunities like social networks and availability and small size have ‎become the inseparable parts of the people’s lives. ‎

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, while, in fact, such as, in my opinion, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1965.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48882681564 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3621226154 2.67179642975 126% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54748603352 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9875802694 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.421052632 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8421052632 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177908346158 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597245398409 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644200275587 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122583695381 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407919922868 0.0645574589148 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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