Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Leadership comes naturally: one can not learn to be a leader. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I strongly disagree with that statement, and I believe that everyone can learn to be a leader, although it depends on various situations and conditions. I hold this opinion because of several reasons. First, I think leadership is not a hierarchical process and it does not come naturally, instead, individuals can be a leader based on their interests, demands, and abilities. Second, leadership itself contains various types and we should basically identify what kind of leadership we are going to obtain, whether political leadership or leadership in tiny communities such as groups in school or even more basic ones.
According to my point of view, leadership is not inherited by certain process or hierarchy and it does not come naturally. In other words, which distinguishes between a leader and an ordinary person is not based on genetic or genealogy. It is clear that what differentiate between a leader and others is meritocracy, which means being prior and pioneer in particular things based on one's capability and competence. Besides, leadership requires specific properties and characteristics which does not come naturally and without effort and struggle. One of the criterion of a leader is ability of management. Leader should be able to administrate and manage different situations during difficulties and problems and he should put himself in various circumstances in order to get experiences and skills to deal with the problems during crisis and dilemma.
Moreover, by leadership, at first we should recognize the different types of leadership and we should know that we talk about which kind of leadership, because it has manifold properties. For instance, a political leader in certain community such as country, should be capable of handling his country in different aspects, also he should be popular among his people to govern them efficiently and influence them by his theories and beliefs.
In general, it seems to me that leadership does not come naturally, contrarily, one's should do efforts and struggles to obtain leadership based on his experience and knowledge and ability.
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- TPO 38 integrated writing skill 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, moreover, second, so, for instance, i think, in general, in particular, kind of, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30838323353 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0557834346 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535928143713 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.328858972 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.384615385 100.406767564 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6923076923 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.45110844103 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238830391882 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913690284667 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596544701097 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148172985447 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527014788956 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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