Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The muturated human has a lot of charachterestic which are created by practice and learning or are existed in him since his born. Modern people are more capable to learn various traits by educacation ,therefore they enthsusiasms are more. The problem here is wheter all the human's feature can be learned? Personally in the beleif that some traits like the power of the leadership are intrinsic or is better to say more intrinsic because human indicated that can reach anythings by efforts. I illustrate my opinion in the following essay.
First off, I think if any traits like leadership was be learnable everyone efforts whole their life to learn it due to the power its bring about. So I think there is a reason that all people can't be a leader even they be under the best coaching and this reason will be the adherent of some charachterestics. For example I think one traits that people with adherent leadership have is the calmness when do everything. The peole who try to be a leader often be nervouse when the condition is out of their control. This problem cause to have bad relations with the members of their group so on, the member never believe on them.
Secondly, historical evidences demonstrated that the power of being leader is intrinsic. It can be obvious that many of countries were under the contoroling of some families for decades. With the ending of the period of one king, he was heribated his throns for his sons. In first view this procedure looked to unfair that someone only by the relationship and without deservation heribated the thrown but the evidence shows that the proivince have a good situation in the next period. This means that the son of the the king have the power of leadership like his father. This case was not obvious just in one region or one time that convince us our results are fallacious, But also this case exsit all over the time wholeworld.
In sum, I think ordinary people can learn a technique to disguise other one but its not stable for long time. For example they can show a prosperous leader but by the changing of the circumstance they would be nervous and stressfull. In addition the historical evidence indicate a country was be under controled of one familliy for years that shows leadership comes naturally.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e to learn various traits by educacation ,therefore they enthsusiasms are more. Th...
^^
Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...think if any traits like leadership was be learnable everyone efforts whole their ...
^^
Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...think there is a reason that all people cant be a leader even they be under the best...
^^^^
Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one trait', 'a trait', or simply 'traits'?
Suggestion: one trait; a trait; traits
...e charachterestics. For example I think one traits that people with adherent leadership ha...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 513, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...next period. This means that the son of the the king have the power of leadership like ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 513, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...next period. This means that the son of the the king have the power of leadership like ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 729, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ase exsit all over the time wholeworld. In sum, I think ordinary people can lear...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 238, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...hey would be nervous and stressfull. In addition the historical evidence indicate a coun...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 294, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...torical evidence indicate a country was be under controled of one familliy for yea...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74559193955 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66464692868 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511335012594 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9016102953 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1578947368 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8947368421 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203314534752 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650545675507 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423189717242 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124291080555 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484969639331 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e to learn various traits by educacation ,therefore they enthsusiasms are more. Th...
^^
Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...think if any traits like leadership was be learnable everyone efforts whole their ...
^^
Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...think there is a reason that all people cant be a leader even they be under the best...
^^^^
Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one trait', 'a trait', or simply 'traits'?
Suggestion: one trait; a trait; traits
...e charachterestics. For example I think one traits that people with adherent leadership ha...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 513, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...next period. This means that the son of the the king have the power of leadership like ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 513, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...next period. This means that the son of the the king have the power of leadership like ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 729, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ase exsit all over the time wholeworld. In sum, I think ordinary people can lear...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 238, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...hey would be nervous and stressfull. In addition the historical evidence indicate a coun...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 294, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...torical evidence indicate a country was be under controled of one familliy for yea...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74559193955 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66464692868 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511335012594 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9016102953 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1578947368 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8947368421 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203314534752 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650545675507 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423189717242 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124291080555 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484969639331 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.