Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are two types of features that a person have, first category contains characteristics that a person is endowed with, the other category comprise the features and skills we obtain. Personally, I believe management is of the latter group. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, there are some sort of abilities in nature of every person and they can be distinctly from each other. To be more specific, it is possible that a child be exposed to a situation that stimulate his or her brain and the managing part of their brain get developed faster than others. Thus, this person who had this ability in himself and was able to nurture it from young ages has more chance of being a leader in the future. However, this doesn't eliminate the chance of other individuals who did not have it in themselves from young ages or practiced it a lot. Those people can still gain experience by coping with life challenges. Each barrier that we overcome in our life make us a more eligible person to lead. Hence, from my vintage point, having a natural instinct to lead is merely a boon that give the edge to its owner, but still people can acquire this ability by encountering with life's hardships.
Another significant reason is that there are assortment majors which pertain to managing. Annually, a lot of people choose these majors as their college or university field. Focusing on these subjects for several years at college will help people to flourish and compensate their deficiency in natural leading ability. My brother is a compelling example of this. He used to be neutral about all the decisions made at home. He used to follow my parents' orders and frankly I could see no natural skill of leading in this child. My best guess of his future was that he would be an employee in a company and do whatever his boss tells him. However, he chose MBA as his university major and after that he established his own business and now his a prosperous businessman who has a lot of employee.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that although having natural ability for leading can benefits lucky people who were blessed with it, there is still a good chance that people acquire requisite factors by experience or education and that will make them perfect leaders.
- A university has money in its budget to do one thing to improve its facilities for students It can either improve the quality of the technology for example computers and printers that it provides for students or it can redesign spaces where students hold 76
- It is commonly believed that in life success is not the most important thing it is more important to remain happy and optimistic when we fail Do you agree with that idea Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer Be sure to use your own word 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Because the world is changing so quickly people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 71
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Leadership comes naturally one cannot learn to be a leader Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion which of the following is the best thing to do Interrupt and correct the mistake right away Wait until the class or meeting is over 76
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 31, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'sorts'?
Suggestion: sorts
...g essay. To begin with, there are some sort of abilities in nature of every person ...
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Line 2, column 452, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...g a leader in the future. However, this doesnt eliminate the chance of other individua...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 742, Rule ID: VINTAGE_POINT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'vantage point'?
Suggestion: vantage point
...eligible person to lead. Hence, from my vintage point, having a natural instinct to lead is m...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 774, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun employee seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of employees'.
Suggestion: a lot of employees
...ow his a prosperous businessman who has a lot of employee. In conclusion, I am of the opinion t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 89, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
... having natural ability for leading can benefits lucky people who were blessed with it, ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, frankly, hence, however, if, so, still, thus, i feel, in conclusion, sort of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1909.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67892156863 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54806613955 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1147419662 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.473684211 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4736842105 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113421639241 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364208599549 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282027911161 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604728643406 0.150856017488 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246976513843 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 31, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'sorts'?
Suggestion: sorts
...g essay. To begin with, there are some sort of abilities in nature of every person ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 452, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...g a leader in the future. However, this doesnt eliminate the chance of other individua...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 742, Rule ID: VINTAGE_POINT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'vantage point'?
Suggestion: vantage point
...eligible person to lead. Hence, from my vintage point, having a natural instinct to lead is m...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 774, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun employee seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of employees'.
Suggestion: a lot of employees
...ow his a prosperous businessman who has a lot of employee. In conclusion, I am of the opinion t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 89, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
... having natural ability for leading can benefits lucky people who were blessed with it, ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, frankly, hence, however, if, so, still, thus, i feel, in conclusion, sort of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1909.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67892156863 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54806613955 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1147419662 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.473684211 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4736842105 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113421639241 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364208599549 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282027911161 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604728643406 0.150856017488 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246976513843 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.