Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Peoples lifestyle is very important. Developing technology repeatedly affect people life manner. There is an argument among different people about whether today life is easier than an ancient one or not. Each facet has a con and pro by its own.
The most important merit of today life is prevailing advanced technology. The more improvement the technology the more comfortable in life. Our grandparents time, women learned nothing but housework. They were not allowed to learn social activities and their responsibilities were limited to washing clothes, cooking food, disciplining children and some other activities in the home area. Since most of these works done by hand they fulfilled all women's daytime. Nowadays because of abundant improving technology, they can do some of the mentioned duties by the specific machines which are devised newly. So, they have much time to participate in social exercises. Furthermore, Families having daughter permit and also learn how they advent in the society in the future. Besides, advanced technology makes communications faster and safer. Those days, people bounded to use telegraphs or some simple phones to communicate with one another, but today, as they embraced technology, people may are able more keeping in touch by using computers or cell phones for E-mailing, skyping everywhere and every time that they would like to have a connection with everyone.
New distractions are the exclusive benefit of today lifestyle. in the past lifestyle, all entertainments were bounded. During the day people just could go to the country or jungles in the summer or built a snowman in the winter and at night they might go to the party or look at the sky by naked eyes. conversely, today there are many manufactories parks, cinemas, and more attainable entertainments that not only do people help to have more joyful actions, but augment their satisfaction sense of life as well. In addition, the transportation improvements make easier and more pleasant in taking a trip.
The most remarkable disadvantages of new life are that living expenses are much more than before. Albeit, technology eas mankind life, but governments should take more tax for utilizing new instruments or restoring the city's facilities. So a person loving benefit new facilities must work more. The more work, the more salary people can earn that is crucial to have a comfortable life. Moreover, since people are so busy today they relieve to communicate from a distance, so there is no face to face relation between them. As a result, the calm and comfortability that comes from being in family and friend atmosphere are not endured.
In conclusion, despite this point, that technology makes people life easier and beneficial but using that need the hardworking and enterprising person to get more income to have an ability to manage using facilities. in the end, because of that advantages of technology worth to disadvantages, we are allowed to infer that people have easier and more comfortable life these days.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, conversely, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2552.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 490.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20816326531 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91053895088 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548979591837 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 835.2 618.680645161 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4994109859 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5185185185 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1481481481 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.40740740741 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176999201283 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507257068574 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441348585007 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102556027745 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0129017181123 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 86.8835125448 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.