Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No one can cast a shadow of doubt on the importance of the role which developments and available types of equipment play in modern society. Although some may believe that stress and various challenges accompany today's complicated and fast-changing world, I am inclined to the view that advancement in technology and different breakthroughs have made life more comfortable compared to the past.
First and foremost, It is an undeniable fact that nowadays we have been provided with different utensils. Take, for instance, electric utilities. In the past, our grandparents had to do most tasks manually; however, today, we can perform most of the house chores with machines like a washing machine or vacuum cleaner. Gone are the days when individuals put most of their time doing daily tasks, now people spend their time more efficiently doing intellectual things rather than handy works.
Secondly, it is crystal clear that living with advanced technology has brought more convenient to society. For example, if we look at the construction developments in the recent decade, we will be astonished by the amounts of achievements. Different techniques have made construction easier, prefabricated materials, advanced insulation systems, smart technologies of controlling the conditions, and electronic gadgets of fire fighting are among the improvements that made a living in these buildings comfortable.
Last but not least, besides all the merits of technological advancements, there are some certain demerits. One of the most prominent challenges, which human beings have to deal with, is the ever-growing stress of the competitive environment in the modern way of living. The traditional way of life was slow; also, there were not many concerns about financial matters since people were used to simple and straightforward methods for obtaining their needs. On the other hand, with the growth of the world network and fierce competition, living has become complicated, even though modern lifestyles' blessings are undisputable.
To sum up, considering all the pros and cons of modern living, I think it is now clear how much our lives have been developed thanks to the industrial achievements. Life becomes more relaxed in terms of doing house chores, plus more free time would remain for the adults. Nevertheless, we should find better ways to manage the stress of the fast-changing world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...washing machine or vacuum cleaner. Gone are the days when individuals put most of t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i think, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2038.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43466666667 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07361994325 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621333333333 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4400502698 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.375 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4375 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4375 5.45110844103 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131283032217 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370313228283 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377983848077 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684248697884 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256785170893 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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