Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this modern world technology is getting advance day by day and making our life easier. Some people are inclined toward the attitude that in old times life was relaxing and comfortable, whereas, some hold different perspective. I personally, though, believe that today life chilling because science made it trouble free in all ways. In the following essay, I intend to put forth my points and reasons for support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that with the advancement of technology new generation have a lot of time to spend happily with the family. This is because in old times people had to work hard in order for living. To exemplify, when I was kid as grand parents raised me and they really worked harder to give me the better future. My grand mother cooked food for me and it took hours because no machinery were invented at that time. Moreover, when I cook anything and use grinder and distinct items, it reminds me of my grand mother. Therefore, this example illustrates the importance of effortless live.
Secondly, my grand parents had to plan for get togethers at least fifteen days before so everyone in the family can connect. To explain broadly, there were no phone or internet and interconnection was arduous. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. I do remeber when I was a child and for family gatherings we accustomed to wait for a long time. Sometimes we did not even heard anything for months from our loved ones and relatives. However, nowadays phone have solved this problem. It is definitely not complicated to get in touch with the people all around the world. Thus, this experience taught me that now life is so peaceful and tension free.
In the light of the reasons mentioned, I strongly believed that our grand parents had spent more hard time when they were child. Therefore, I recommend considering these reasons before making a choice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'did' requires base form of the verb: 'hear'
Suggestion: hear
... a long time. Sometimes we did not even heard anything for months from our loved ones...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, whereas, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79881656805 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63779920851 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582840236686 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8557840351 48.9658058833 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.1 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138346486243 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408900403501 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309240139407 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913675178841 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244515219604 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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