Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Modern transportation and shipping has made the world a better place to live.
Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.
Due to the civilization, transportation and shipping has become an important piece of our society. even some people argue that the advance of transportation and shipping has resulted in a polluted planet, I still believe today is a better place to live because of the modern transportation and shipping.
First of all, the diverse vehicles that people can use today provides lots of convenience. one can arrive another country within a day by taking an airplane. In contrast, people might need to spend a month to travel by using combination tools of horses and ships to reach another country before the plane was invented. My Granpa's experience is a compelling illustration of this. when he was doing business before traveling between China and Taiwan, he had to buy the required tickets a month before the trip. scheduling the trip became a burden for him since he had to figure every details of his upcoming agenda even nothing can be certain at that moment. On the other hand, it is such an unnecessary thing to plan for all the schedule ahead of time. In fact, everyone could buy a ticket for the same day trip because of the sufficient vehicles.
Secondly, the advance of the technology has brought down the costs for moving around. To be more specific, the popularity of public transportation system nowadays allows people to get a cheaper ticket than in the past. A person might have to take a taxi at an expensive price to explore the New York City back in the day. But, with more and more subways line get into production, people no longer have to pay for an expensive ride. Instead, a ticket for the subway only costs less than two bucks, which is affordable for everyone.
Finally, the fact that we can get everything we need from supermarkets nearby is due to modern shipping. Without it, we could have to spend more time shopping in a traditional market looking for what we need. As a result, collecting grocery and essential goods would be a challenge for everyone. For instance, when I was young, I always had to go to different stores for different kinds of goods. The electronic stores only provide things that are electronic related. Based on this fact, I would have to go to another store to get the toothpaste after I got the electronic toothbrush. On the contrary, a local grocery store nearby could cover things from food to paper towel. No one would have to worry about where to get each items.
In summary, with all fore said reasons, one can realize how modern transport and shipping has made our life more convenient and easier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, even so, for instance, in contrast, in fact, in summary, as a result, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2121.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74496644295 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65890609866 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541387024609 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 675.0 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.714251057 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.375 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0988995741199 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0259242254101 0.076458572812 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473692936427 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813189045544 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722274296081 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.