Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
work has been the most important part of people's life. people spent more time at work than doing other activities. so choosing the correct content of work can lead to a more satisfied life.
First of all, having more different types of tasks provides people a chance to refresh their mind. when we work on a similar taks for too long, the brain get stuck and we might feel like we are robuts. However, taking a break and trying to focus on another topic enable our brain to function again. For example, when I was working on a specific statistical project for a continuous week last summer, I felt tired and lost the energy to continue the project. At that time, I took an adivce from my advisor to switch to something else. Surprisingly, I found the moltivation again while I was working on the computer science assignment. After since, I started to perform diverse tasks at a time to avoid myself getting stuck in the same task. Apparently, by doing so, I feel more satisfied.
Secondly, doing multiple types of tasks can grant more sense of achievement. one could gain more satisfaction by counting the amout of types of work that have been accomplished. For instance, elon musk not only started Tesla but also spend times on his other company, SpaceX. when people ask about the reason why he would not focus on just one of them. he answered that both companies' missions are part of his interests, so he prefer to work on both than giving up any of them. As a result, newspaper reported his success on both enterprise, which in turn made elon musk more satisfied because of the fact that he now own two successful companies than merely one that most of the other people do.
In summary, working on diverse of works lead to a more satisfied life as people could refresh their mind and feel more sense of achievement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in summary, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63803680982 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47309280835 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558282208589 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8481686306 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211686060399 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682252218141 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058446175837 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118901378441 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471632239702 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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