Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern transportation and shipping have made the world a better place to live. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.
Modern transportation and shipping have turned around the lifestyle of every individual enormously. Things are more comfortable to access with the invention of many advanced technologies that have led to modern transportation. I agree with the idea of the current transport and shipping makes people a better world to live for two reasons. We have the opportunity to save a lot of time, and our travels are accessible.
First and foremost, we save a lot of time in the current era than we used to in the past with the advent of modern transportation. Nothing is beyond reach or impractical with current transit. For instance, previously with only horse ride or bullock carts, reaching from one state to another was a few days to week process and people mostly had to avoid it to save their time. But, now with the airplanes, nonstop trains, this time has shrunk to a day. In this sense, nowadays people prefer to use the new advances in transportation because they treasure their time as a valuable thing in their life.
Another point to consider important is that the transportation in the current era has made travel easier and more fun. When it comes to more comfortable, earlier people working too far from their family would almost lose touch with them because of the difficulty involved in the travel to their loved one. But, now they can take a flight and trip to and forth their home without problems. International travel has become a common thing for most of us to spend our vacation.
In sum, the new transportation provides us the opportunity to feel more relaxed in every travel and also we can save a lot of time travel around the world. In this sense, I think that this is an excellent opportunity for us to enjoy our life entirely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74183006536 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76411287078 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52614379085 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7282682113 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7333333333 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13333333333 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153611335625 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597510978567 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640540468426 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104197013319 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924622750636 0.0645574589148 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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