Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the modern world, we should never be impolite to another person.
In our modern world there lots of humans that live with each other. For having a good experience of life the humans must have some rules in order to improve their quality of their life. And also how to behave with others is important. Some people behave badly with others, while there are some people behaving in a polite way and having a good personality. In my opinion being polite is necessary in order to have a better life in our modern world for three main reasons which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
The most significant reason is that by being polite to others during the day we can get more respects from others. By getting more respect, we are more likely to succeed in our own life. If we are not polite, so we do not have any chance to reach are goals. Because people do not like persons with a poor behavior, and sometimes these kind of behaviors could cause some violations or getting our friends upset. If we aim to have more friends in our life, so we must be polite. Politeness is a key to be happier. The more polite we are, the more happy we are, and the more likely we are being respected by others, and therefore the more likely we can succeed in our life.
The second reason I want to mention is that by being polite to others we are more likely being helped by others when we are in a bad situations. People like polite persons. Polite persons have more friends. By having more friends we are more likely to be helped in our bad situations. Friends can affect our life in a positive way, and they can help to solve some major problems in our life. The more we are polite, the more friends we have. If we are impolite, so we do not have any friends. By having no friends we are alone in our life. And we do not have any support from good friends on which we can rely.
Another remarkable reason is that by being polite we are more likely to have a better job. As we all know having a good job and polite coworkers could affect our life positively. It is obvious if we are impolite we do not have any chance to work in an environment having coworkers with good personality. And if we work with impolite people, so they could have some bad effects in some aspects of our life.
Briefly I prefer to be polite while I think most of people like to be polite too. As I mentioned being polite could have some advantages like being respected by others, having more friend, living a life happier and have a better job with polite coworkers. In my opinion these are the most important things could cause us to be more satisfied with our own life, if we are polite.
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Essay evaluation report
In our modern world there lots of humans that live with each other.
In our modern world, there are lots of humans who live with each other.
In my opinion these are the most important things could cause us to be more satisfied with our own life, if we are polite.
In my opinion these are the most important things which could cause us to be more satisfied with our own life, if we are polite.
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flaws:
No. of Different Words: 162 200
We are expecting:
No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 19 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 28 15
No. of Words: 490 350
No. of Characters: 2055 1500
No. of Different Words: 162 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.705 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.194 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.159 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 136 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 68 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.385 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.464 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.412 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.544 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.275 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In our modern world there lots of humans...
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Line 1, column 314, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a polite way" with adverb for "polite"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s, while there are some people behaving in a polite way and having a good personality. In my o...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...explore in the following paragraphs. The most significant reason is that by b...
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Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...ons with a poor behavior, and sometimes these kind of behaviors could cause some violation...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e likely we can succeed in our life. The second reason I want to mention is t...
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Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'situation'?
Suggestion: situation
...g helped by others when we are in a bad situations. People like polite persons. Polite per...
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Line 5, column 317, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...situations. Friends can affect our life in a positive way, and they can help to solve some major ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m good friends on which we can rely. Another remarkable reason is that by bei...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...effects in some aspects of our life. Briefly I prefer to be polite while I th...
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Line 9, column 48, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...fly I prefer to be polite while I think most of people like to be polite too. As I mentioned b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, if, second, so, therefore, while, i think, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 38.0 15.1003584229 252% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2116.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 490.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31836734694 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25204428395 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.344897959184 0.524837075471 66% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 717.3 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5231678631 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5714285714 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195223069327 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813547517961 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444564249745 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136876234325 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214733731039 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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