Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the modern world, we should never be impolite to another person.
With the development of modern society, the relationship between modern people becomes more intricate, especially when making conversation with strangers online. From my perspective, we should always be polite with any one at any time, any where.
polite manner can maintain all relationship readily and stable. if people are polite, they will point out others’ mistake in a comfortable way, which is helping to fix problem without unnecessary conflict. if you are polite, people probably tends to like you because everyone prefers to accompany with polite person, which makes them maintain a good mood. For instance, a polite job-seeker are more likely to gain a job in job market. In daily interactions, people are willing to treat polite people in the same way, on the contrary, no one will be friendly to you if you are rude.
Furthermore, polite behaviors can accelerate the formation of harmony circumstances in society. While living in the society with rapid development, healthy, authentic friendships can help us work through burdensome challenges. so, how could we build a stronger, lasting friendship? The answer is being polite to everyone. if you are polite to them, they will return you with same manner. This is not only happening among individuals, but also being reflected on every aspect in our society. As is known to all, there are many ethnic groups in china. being the greatest ethnic group in china, Han people, need to maintain the utmost respect to other nationalities, so that the national harmony and prosperity could be achieved.
When we don’t respect to each other, serious social problems would occur everywhere. A people poor in politeness would not easy to earn a better life on society. For example, companies are unlikely to employ someone with bad temper, which makes friends and peers feels uncomfortable, and as a result, those rude people are probably isolated or dismissed even they have professional skills. if these situations take place on each and every aspect of our society, then our community would become massed up by the social member who lacks of moral standard and self-restrict. Rages could spread so quickly that no trust would remain. At last, government would suffer from large burden for implementing some extreme laws in order to maintain the country’s normal operations.
In a nutshell, the abilities to being polite to others serve as a vital catalyst for healthy friendships, outstanding careers and better social circumstances which are requisites for the survival in the present world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, as a result, on the contrary, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2171.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26941747573 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87719044491 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589805825243 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8580165845 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6818181818 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31818181818 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151244769185 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425667743865 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455239070115 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901281305257 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519074310902 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.