Thorough the history people always need to buy new things for their life. One of the methods to introduce new products is advertising. By the way, some people think that in most cases advertisements try to show that that product is very affordable and profitable although it is not in reality, hence others argue this idea. Although both ideas are respectful, from my own perspective, I highly support the first idea and in the next paragraphs will delve into the most important reasons.
One of the most significant reasons is that Companies usually use celebrities to introduce their new products. When people see that their favorite actress is using that product, they will go and buy it without thinking. An experiment which has been done 3 years ago showed that the products which used famous actors and actresses had an approximately double size in selling in comparison with others.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that during a short advertisement the founder only implies positive aspects of his product. The time for advertisement on the Tv and radio is limit and in some cases, there is only a picture on the billboard in the city. So the producer tries to summarize everything and only speaks about the good features of his products. By the way, there are always advantages and disadvantages in products, but they ignore it and people will realize it when they already have bought that.
Although the aforementioned reasons are those which may be one realize at first glance, still there is one reason. During an advertisement, the producers try to make people believe this fact that they really need this. For example, they can show some unnecessary needs and then reveal that with our product you can get to your needs.
To make a long story short, if ones merit all aspects of what has been challenging in above paragraphs, soon he will understand this key point that in most cases he should not only trust on advertisement which he sees on the TV or other platforms and it is inevitable to search more by ourself and also ask friends and family experience about those products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, really, so, still, then, for example, by the way, in most cases, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86740331492 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67827616432 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569060773481 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9312070325 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.466666667 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1333333333 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187061139064 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614745855828 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387924815793 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101945086757 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460000992267 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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