Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this sophisticated and progressive world where we live, companies use advertisements, sellers or even someone from your close friends which actually is the employ of the company to show and sell their products. I this regard, I think companies advertise their products by just illustrate strong points of their products or by trying to misdirect of targeted interruption. Therefore, I totally agree with this statement and I believe that they try to show products much better that they are. The reasons to substantiate my viewpoint are elaborated upon hereunder.
Firstly, they just illustrate their product strong points in the advertisement. You never can see in a TV or internet advertisement to say " this product is not suitable for this people". For example, I have psoriasis and I have to use a certain type of shampoo. However, I see an advertisement in internet that they discuss with a unknown and the celebrities, all of them say it really work. Which lure me to buy and use it and outcome in horrible. I need to go to doctor for several month to be better.
Secondly, they use celebrities to use their fame to overlook their weaknesses. We all truth to the celebrities that we really love them, some times we try to imitate them. I saw a car advertisement that used a very famous face. He want to go to picnic with his friend and he is supposed to take all of them. As he takes, he says " wow plenty place for all of my friends" even thought the car just have 5 people capacity like other cars. However, after some month I saw that my friend Naghme buy one of that cars. She has three children and she bought it because she had believed the car has plenty of space.
Third, they use emotion in some kinds of advertisements. The worse kind of the abuse that advertisements do, is to use children feeling to target them and sell their product. As all children, my cousin who's 5 years old, really love to play with toys and watch cartoons. Once we played with his toys. He love to play just one of them when I asked the reason he said that dull in very alone and doesn't have anyone to play since in a cartoon that he watch the baby doll doesn't have any friend.
In conclusion, taking aforementioned reasons and examples into account, I believe advertisement abuse people truth by showing products more better than they are.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, however, look, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, even so, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1951.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65632458234 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78135848538 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498806682578 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7015054374 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8260869565 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2173913043 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17391304348 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182268696805 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558645153662 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669362893847 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122216619924 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583117699683 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.