Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most of the biggest problems in the world will be solved in the next few decades. Use details and examples to support your
The rapidly changing world opens windows to a hopeful future. It seems that our today's dilemmas will be solved in the next few decades, and people will not be confronted with these problems in the near future. I have several reasons why I feel this way that I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, nowadays, the world is intricate, developed, and competitive, and due to that, the world will lead to inventions and technologies; these novel technologies will provide hope to solve problems. Not only do these new technologies assist today's situations, but they also will improve other sides of science. For instance, attempting to find out about diseases and solve that with robots was increased in recent years and interwoven engineering and science, and leads to figuring out new methods for effective treatments. Therefore, advancements in science and technology may be caused better life in the next future decades.
Secondly, one of the most important trouble in the present time is environmental affairs. Today's people are more cautious compared with the past people, so it seems that future men will be more conscious. Due to knowledgeable people, our earth's problems will decrease; hence the members of the public will remember the past dilemmas, and they will learn to protect their environment. My personal experience is one compelling example of this; I remember my childhood; at that time, no one did not know things about the environment and natural resources, and there was no education about that in schools; on the other hand, I see today's school, and I will be more hopeful for future. Currently, schools have books that indicate environmental problems and emphasis resolving them.
Last but not least, there are different NGOs on various subjects. Demanding legal rights is pursued by these organizations. SO governments and authorities are forced to be more responsible. In another way, by increasing in number of NGOs, the social and political situation will be improved, and some of the problems will be solved. For example, in my society, women could not ride bicycles, but after the high pressure from different NGOs, policymakers were forced to eliminate this law, and women could ride bicycles like men.
In a nutshell, I am off in the opinion that there are different reasons such as science and technology progress, being more conscious, and increased NGO organization demands like social and political requests that make me optimistic about the future world as well as it is better to be optimistic than be disappointed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 209, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: increasing
...be more responsible. In another way, by increasing in number of NGOs, the social and political situa...
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Line 6, column 296, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...litical situation will be improved, and some of the problems will be solved. For example, i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i feel, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2152.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13603818616 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85537096572 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53937947494 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 666.0 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 12.0 1.86738351254 643% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.4411538374 48.9658058833 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.555555556 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2777777778 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 5.45110844103 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224479956695 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676293036707 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596692644652 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128244926244 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599962545606 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.