Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer.
In life, we all have many experiences some are good and some are bitter. One can learn the best thing from their own experience. Firstly at the beginning, one finds experiences hard but eventually they gave us important lessons for upcoming life. I definitely agree with the statement that many experiences are apparently difficult, however, they provide valuable information for our life.
Sometimes if we take our own past experiences like studying in school or university. People have many difficulties in academic and they just do hard work even it is difficult for them. Eventually, it will help people to get success in academic life. In students life learning a new thing is the most usual experience, they find hard but their persistence nature lead them to success and that help them in the future. For instance, I have a fear of appearing exam in school days, but after attempting my first exam my fear just goes away and now I do not worry about any exam in my life. Thus, exam experience seemed difficult at the time, now it will help me in future.
Moreover, some experiences are very helpful to find any solution. Like, in adolescence adult find many problems in their life. They are difficult sometimes. But what if they give up? They never succeed in their life. Experience seems very competitive but their results are very beneficial for adults. Sometimes, they can learn from a difficult situation. Like, if an adult has a problem of asking a question in class, and once he dares to ask a question in front of all students that fear gradually leave out. So, that one experience of asking one question help him to fear out of asking and by that he concludes that it seems hard but afterwards it is good for him.
Many time one can take a lesson with having new experience from different people and that experience help for future decision. For example, at the time of any problem no one helps him even their friends, he finds the difficult situation. As he need help but no one there for him. But after, that time he finds real friends that helpful and trustable. So, the difficult situation experience gives us a significant lesson for future decision.
Thus, many experiences look hard at that moment but afterwards, they are a good teacher in one life, as one can learn the best lesson from that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74137931034 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6100112551 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440886699507 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7274467583 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.24 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200218466822 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656554078884 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654631644062 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124757919594 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490952388878 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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