Twin studies
The reading and listening passages are discussing Twin Studies. The article states that the result of the twin studies shows that human personalities in identical twins are much similar than fraternal twins and this is due to their same genetic makeup. The author provides some reasons for support. However, the speaker explains that identical twins have similar personalities and other characteristics traits are due to their upbringing in the same environment and refute each of the author's reasons.
First, the speaker mentions that the result of the same environment studies for twins shows that similarity in behaviour of twins is due to their same environment, but it is not true in some cases. She elaborates this point by mentioning that identical or fraternal twins if grown in the same environment, so they share similar personalities. In this, in both cases of identical twins and fraternal twins they both have the same environment, if this is possible then identical twins share same similarities than fraternal twins and, this is due to their upbringing in the same environment rather than by genetic behaviour.
Moreover, she says, but in some of the cases, the upbringing of identical twins are like as they are a single unit. For example, they both have the same ice-cream and cloth or food choice. Family members consider them as two half of single person. They wear the same dress. So, in this situation, the identical twins share more similarity compare to the fraternal twins is due to their upbringing in the same environment, even they have similar genetic makeup or not.
This rebuts the assertion made in the reading passage that more similar characteristics traits in identical twins compared to fraternal twins is more likely from their heritability rather their same environment.
So, the reading and listening are totally opposing each other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...is is due to their same genetic makeup. The author provides some reasons for suppor...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd refute each of the authors reasons. First, the speaker mentions that the res...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ment rather than by genetic behaviour. Moreover, she says, but in some of the c...
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Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...aviour. Moreover, she says, but in some of the cases, the upbringing of identical twin...
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Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'half' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'halves'.
Suggestion: halves
...ce. Family members consider them as two half of single person. They wear the same dr...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ey have similar genetic makeup or not. This rebuts the assertion made in the re...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ability rather their same environment. So, the reading and listening are totall...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, for example, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1373.03311258 115% => OK
No of words: 304.0 270.72406181 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19078947368 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80485456687 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.407894736842 0.540411800872 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 419.366225166 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.5401055336 49.2860985944 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.714285714 110.228320801 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 21.698381199 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06452816374 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319111581319 0.272083759551 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127605220918 0.0996497079465 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126809831529 0.0662205650399 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189225082143 0.162205337803 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126631703277 0.0443174109184 286% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.3589403974 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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