Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important investment for a company is to spend money to improve the work skills of its employees.
company's main goal is to generate benefits. To create them, there are two ways, increasing incomes or reducing costs. To make them both happen, business need to incur in some expenses. In my opinion, education is the most effective manner of doing things to develop a company. I feel this way for the two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
humans manage resources in an unexactly way. every enterprise needs their employees to make operations succeed. Improving their skills could make them manage the variables that they interact in a more efficient way. this can be illustrated by my own personal experience. Three years ago, I used to work in a paper company where must of the work made was executed by human hands. The management realized that most of the paper wastes were originated by ignorance of the process. Therefore, every employee of the company received course taught by the quality team, on how the production chain begins and how it ends, and what important is their job for the success of this procedure. The results of this courses were astonishing, the wastes were reduced by 50 percent.
Moreover, increasing the labor abilities a roster makes the enterprise more competitive. As more capable is the roster of a company, as the nearer to the forefront of the industry the company will be. I work for a tech company, where industry demands constant innovation. twice a year, my boss send me to seminars, courses for the reason I could come with fresh ideas and think in a different perspective. some of my partners.
In conclusion, the most important investment for a company is make their employees more capable. this is because reduces their costs and make them more competitive.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important investment for a company is to spend money to improve the work skills of its employees. 60
- Businesses should hire employees for their entire lives. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 293.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92491467577 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70101535188 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566552901024 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4791942283 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.15 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.65 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.45110844103 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16162238292 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439047150512 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520167485411 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100063537854 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177737581436 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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