Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the contemporary world, due to the advent of televisions and the internet, watching films and television are the best juveniles could spend their leisure time. Whether the children get influenced by movies or not is a matter of intense debate. As far as I am concerned, I totally agree with the notion. This position is based on two reasons that will be analyzed thoroughly below.
And it is very easy for a child to get influenced by certain movies and series.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that most of the shows these days are violent. In other words, It involves fights and brutal acts that often have the potential of influencing the youngs' mind. For instance, my younger brother is just ten years old, and he loves watching action and thriller movies so, when we hear the news about terrorist attacks and wars of two nations, he doesn't show many emotions and he talks as if it's too normal to have wars and terrorist attacks. Such a contribution from him is due to watching violence and serious movies. And it made him look at wars and attacks quite normal. This example illustrates how movies and television can set up the mind of children.
Furthermore, staring at the screen for a long time can affect the eye and vision. What I mean is that children those days, instead of going for outdoor tours and plays, most of the time, they watch television and movies at home and as a result, it can have a huge negative impact on their eye and vision. Take my nephew for an example, he spends a lot of time on the screen watching television hence, very recently when I had a visit to his place, I noticed him with glasses. His mother informed me that he could barely see anything because of constantly watching television. This example of my nephew demonstrates how watching movies and television can influence health and eye problems.
In summation, I am of the opinion that because of showing too much violence in movies, also because movies can influence on the eye and health-related problems owing to which I highly agree with the statement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 389, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ist attacks and wars of two nations, he doesnt show many emotions and he talks as if i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, so, for instance, i mean, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70218579235 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58973878829 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546448087432 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7253032501 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.235294118 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5294117647 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127100331841 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418663780652 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326197133338 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726802189792 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255773841612 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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