Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
It is undeniable that movies and television are one of the most important entertainment in the world which not only became an industry in the world, but also have experienced a significant growth. Although, some individuals claim that movies and television have serious drawbacks and negative effect on people life, it seems to me television and movies have positive impact on people life and our society for a couple of reasons described in the following.
To begin with, people free time can positively be enriched by movies and TV, and they can have recreational activities for themselves which is very cost efficient rather than or entertainments such as going to travel. In fact, there is no doubt that people need recreational activities to after a stressful day boost their mood and refresh their mined. Thus, TV and movies provides them with an efficient way of entertainment which is very favorable. For example, at the weekend I go to my brother house and see films and talk about them for hours which hopefully helps me to have pleasure time at the weekend.
Secondly, TV provides people with many educational aspects which aid people learn about various subjects such as wildlife or other cultures. Actually, people effectively can enhance their knowledge in various fields of science which is very important for their personality growth. Furthermore, by TV and specially by cartons parents can teach their children fundamental subjects such as math or the way of living. The statistics in Iran clearly demonstrate that TV and movies are on the most important ways of education which hopefully help families to educate children and even improve their cognitive abilities.
Admittedly, TV and movies can pose dire effects on society such as prevailing violence or encourage delinquency among teenager. Nevertheless, families can take care from their children to see appropriate films which is completely suitable for them. Moreover, the movie industry should take teenager into consideration for producing movies.
To conclude, I strongly believe that the positive effect of movies and television far outweigh the negative ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in fact, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27485380117 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88034700895 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549707602339 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0117223766 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.857142857 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 5.45110844103 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198778230025 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767299769942 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069667991257 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135434293629 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680726089261 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 10.002688172 205% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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