From the beginning of human civilization, we are in an unstoppable journey towards the future. We have gained advancements in many aspects. quality of life, health, education, and more. It is generally believed that the current generation has greater life compared to their parents. As far as I'm concerned, I agree with the statement and I will elaborate my viewpoint in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, the development of education has given rise to many opportunities for the current generation. Due to the innovation of the internet and computer, it is easier to keep pace with the newest knowledge, improvement of techniques makes searching for information effortless. For instance, our parents had to rely on the traditional school to get an education with the traditional method. On the contrary, the current generation has relatively effective physical tools such as tablets or laptops. Online sessions also help to improve the circle of information. with the methods mentioned above, the current generation does have more advantages than their parents.
Second, the current generation has more sources of entertainment. With social media, streaming platforms, and the flourishing of the music industry, the youth have various and sundry ways to have fun. In contrast, our parents only had limited options such as television, radio. Those media only gave artificial experience, not as the current generation enjoys more real experience thanks to the improvement of technologies.
From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw a conclusion that the current generation does have a better life compared to their parents. Due to the improvement of technologies, not only physically healthier but also mentally satisfied.
- Tpo51 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 78
- TPO46 Integrated In the United States medical information about patients traditionally has been recorded and stored on paper forms However there are efforts to persuade doctors to adopt electronic medical record systems in which information about patie 85
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- TPO34 integrated 70
- TPO 45 Integrated Writing Task 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, for instance, in contrast, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 271.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45756457565 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10613006941 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579335793358 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8544179384 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153369289527 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462746479853 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494100028796 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968089369351 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343565054401 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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