Lots of thing changed from the past to now and some of them it became easy to do it. We live now in technological life so this make our life easier. Now I will discuss it.
Firstly, It became easy to study or to understand our lessons. For example, now, we have an internet so, if we have any question we don’t understand or don’t know how to solve it we can search in the internet and we will get it. But in the past, it was difficult to find the answer or to get the information. For example, my father said to me that when he was student it was hard to find any information they wanted because they had to go to library and search hard to find book or any think that help them to solve their homework.
In addition, now, we have comfortable and fast cars so it helps us to transfer from the cities but in the past the cars was not good like now and not all of people can buy it so, some of them went by horses, camels and donkeys. Also, now we have planes to travel between the countries and it takes a few hours from us. In the past, the is no planes, so it taken from them days to travel abroad.
Furthermore, there are lot of tools that help us to clean houses and cook. to compared it with the past it was so uncomfortable to clean house but now it is easy to clean and also to cook.
In conclusion, now, we live in easier life there lot of things that helps us in our daily life. So, in my opinion, in these days life is easy to live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'Lots of things'.
Suggestion: Lots of things
Lots of thing changed from the past to now and some o...
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Line 4, column 75, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
... that help us to clean houses and cook. to compared it with the past it was so unc...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...daily life. So, in my opinion, in these days life is easy to live.
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Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on, in these days life is easy to live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 291.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.99312714777 4.8611393121 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19457716116 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46735395189 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 363.6 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.51630824373 79% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1722235582 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0895667488914 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328817420421 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295401841386 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0534883073409 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218021762543 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.02 58.1214874552 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.86 10.9000537634 54% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.53 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 86.8835125448 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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