Day by day everything is getting easier thanks to the advent of technology. Personally, I believe that nowadays is life more comfortable and enjoyable compared with past times. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explain in the following essay.
First of all, not only achieve something but also to earn money, people do not have to exert exceedingly nowadays. For centuries people have had to work to meet their wants and needs. However, even if it was so difficult in the past to carry out them, everything has become easier with the change of working hours and durations with technology today. Recently, people have had a balance between working and their lives, thanks to that people can live their lives satisfying themselves because they can readily handle their times to meet their needs. My own family is the best example to illustrate that. When my grandparents were young, they had to work in hard conditions for so many hours even to buy the basic needs they had. Because everything was not that accessible or cheap compared to the time period of today. However, nowadays I don't have to spend my precious time buying these things, so I have a lot of free time to devote to my personal needs or hobbies. That's why I think life is more fun and valuable now than in previous times.
Secondly, in contemporary days we have access to nearly every kind of thing in life and that makes our lives more enjoyable and interesting. In the past even in the big cities where you are living to go somewhere was one of the hardest things in the world because there was not enough transportation system or communicating with other people was so hard too. Because in my hometown if you want to a buy phone, you had to register first and then sometimes several months or couple of years later you could have a phone. For instance, my grandmother had relatives who lives in Germany. When they missed each other and wanted to talk or see each other, my grandma would have to go to the post office to call them and they could rare times to talk or when they wanted to see each other usually my grandma had to take the bus however the road to go Germany took for 2 days or more. However, nowadays, we have smartphones, that is, we have enough tools for communication, or because there are enough planes, and in addition, our flight ticket prices are now lower than in the past. Therefore, these days we are capable enough to do all this without doubt and without too much effort. In this way, life has become easier and more enjoyable than before.
To conclude, I strongly feel that nowadays our lives have been improved compared with the past. This is because we do not have so much effort to achieve plenty of things and because of accessibility to everything we can spend our times more enjoyable and interesting way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...I will explain in the following essay. First of all, not only achieve something...
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...devote to my personal needs or hobbies. Thats why I think life is more fun and valuab...
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... valuable now than in previous times. Secondly, in contemporary days we have a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2318.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 506.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58102766798 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7428307748 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4673151248 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470355731225 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 735.3 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0953787363 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.363636364 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13636363636 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186524756998 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569536244764 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450596176884 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107601968081 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441905797636 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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