Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job.
Children are an essential part of our society and parents should be caution with their decision which they make for their children, some of parent encourage their children for job, should teenager do job or not, everyone will answer based on his/her emotional concern or personal experience, since logical response requires an accurate analyses from both sides. As far as, i concerned student parents should encourage their children to do job, there for i present following justifications.
At the one hand, some children are multi talented and they handle multi things together, and they choose to do part time job along study, thus parents should let them independent in their life as they can cope life difficulties beside develop skill to solve problem. Additionally, reading book at school cannot is not enough for survive in society, in addition doing part time job create interest for doing hard work, beside help financially.
On the other hand, if teenage cannot go out due to some security reason than parents should give them some amount of work from their job, for instance, for business family they may hire their children for limited hours with reasonable pay.as they know value of money beside they will start make budget, when teenage start to earn money, they restrict their self from unnecessary expenses, they start to make their budget, with little money in and promote teenager to develop strong career.
To sum up, part-time job willing students to decide right path for saving money, they can do work which is suitable to their skills and knowledge, nothing is best than get experience from mistake, for instance , if they make mistake and might they will punish by owner, possibility to cut salary.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job. 73
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'may', 'so', 'thus', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.267295597484 0.229887763892 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.163522012579 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0754716981132 0.0866891130778 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0377358490566 0.046263068375 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0817610062893 0.0685040099705 119% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122641509434 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0251572327044 0.0351676179071 72% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.41060017477 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0345911949686 0.0309702414327 112% => OK
Particles: 0.0062893081761 0.00188951952338 333% => OK
Determiners: 0.0283018867925 0.0887237588012 32% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0440251572327 0.0209618222197 210% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00943396226415 0.0139019557991 68% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1733.0 2387.08602151 73% => OK
No of words: 286.0 408.028673835 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.05944055944 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.48200974243 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.374125874126 0.338922669872 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.258741258741 0.251872472559 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.167832167832 0.174417080927 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0769230769231 0.112833075102 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41060017477 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.524397521467 113% => OK
Word variations: 63.5932720556 59.2087087015 107% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6684587814 29% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 47.6666666667 20.5533526081 232% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 119.150814796 48.84282405 244% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 288.833333333 120.699889404 239% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.6666666667 20.5533526081 232% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 0.644075263715 207% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.54480286738 162% => OK
Readability: 73.5407925408 45.7405998639 161% => OK
Elegance: 1.46666666667 1.45489161554 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371820129771 0.300154397459 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.174049963102 0.103427244359 168% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0826602845073 0.0752933317313 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.797289835207 0.497263757937 160% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.181656694619 0.151897553556 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204048962583 0.114077575197 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428863545074 0.0781384742642 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.286390507323 0.336927656856 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0480092443344 0.067059652881 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240902003947 0.210909579961 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242542051681 0.0618886996521 39% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8870967742 42% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 13.6433691756 44% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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