Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? one should never judge a person by external appearances. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer .
In most cases, you shouldn't judge a person by external appearances. It is better to
reserve judgment until you have had a chance to get to know the person. judgments
based on external appearances prevent you from really getting to know a person, reinforce
stereotypes, and can lead you to conclusions that aren't true.
When you judge people by their external appearance, you lose the chance to get to
know them. In high school I stayed away from students who were called "bad students"
because they dressed a certain way. I wanted nothing to do with them. Later, I had a
chance to meet a "bad student" because his mother was a friend of my mother. Then I
realized that we actually had a lot in common. My impression of him was very different
once I got to know him.
judging people based on external appearances just reinforces stereotypes. You
might think that a person with a tattoo, for example, is not a nice person. It's easy to
start thinking that all people with tattoos are not nice people. Then you will never make
friends with people who have tattoos or want to work with them or like to live near them.
You will feel uncomfortable around them because all you will see about them is their
tattoos.
judgments based on external appearances can often lead you to conclusions that
aren't true. Maybe you know someone who dresses in old, unfashionable clothes. If all
you see are the clothes, it is easy to think that the person has bad taste or bad habits. But
maybe the truth is different. Maybe that person comes from a lessfortunate family than
you and doesn't have money. Maybe the person is working hard to save money for
school. You will never know if all you do is look at external appearance.
You should always take time to get to know new people before making judgments
about them. External appearance often does not tell us anything about a person.
judging someone by their appearance is misleading, reinforces stereotypes, and doesn't
lead to the truth. It can prevent you from making a true friend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, may, really, so, then, for example, you know, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81284916201 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63345608985 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486033519553 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9442301737 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.92 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.32 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.53405017921 551% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227409349052 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777555808895 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574215494623 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775227962304 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552420973246 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.