Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Money and wealth is one of the important factors that many people dream about it all the time of their lives. They think that money can give the ability to them to achieve anything they wanted from this universe which will build the emotion of success in them. I disagree with this idea because there are so many other ways for somebody to feel success.
First, I want to talk about that you may have enough money but you don’t feel happy, because there are much more things which can-not be bought by money like family, friends and children. You can have a big amount of money but if one of your parents dies in a car accident or a plane crash, you can-not bring them back even if you were rich and spend whole of the money.
Another reason why I disagree with this comment is money management issue. Most of the wealthy people do not know how to spend and invest their fortune to keep it or even make it more. That may depress you and made you feel unsuccessful if you lose it suddenly. For example, I had a nice rich friend who was left alone with a huge amount of money because both of his parents died in a plane crash and all of their investments and moneys were now in their only son’s hands since there were no other siblings in the picture. He was a very young person without any experience in handling a business or financial corporation. So, as I expected he lost most of his parents fortune in less than a year due to his unawareness from financial market which led to his depression and poverty after losing that amount of money.
In addition to these reasons the persons mind set about success is so much important because you can have no money and still feel the success in your life if you define success in your life completely different. your picture of a successful living is also so much crucial in considering money as a success factor in some ones life.
In conclusion, I believe that a man or woman can still be happy and successful without having any money during their life. You are important since you are the person who define success and happiness in its own journey to this peculiar world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 213, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
...cess in your life completely different. your picture of a successful living is also ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, still, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45292620865 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27099201004 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506361323155 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.9921805038 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.666666667 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192920553682 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729656169746 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429268993763 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110017559886 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292614295996 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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