Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
in recent time, there is no doubt that the world has changed a lot due to unforeseen dynamic improvement that affect all the life aspects. However, some people state that they have to get information from many and different resources to be well-informed in this world. So, from my point of view I definitely agree with them for many reasons. to substantiate my case, this essay will illustrate my opinion to elaborate my preference.
To begin with, to be well- informed to all the up dated information with different aspects, you have to get these knowledge from myriad of resources. So, the first and the foremost idea comes to my mind is due to vast advancement you can not be able to know or recognize all the recent information, so you have to look deeply to different sites such as the local news papers that present various information, secondly and the easiest way is surfing the internet by this way you can learn by different methods like reading the most up dated scientific articles, also you can watch videos that illustrate the most sophisticated ideas. so, the ultimate result huge and wide ranges of information that will reflect your standard of knowledge.
On the other hand, the second vital point should be taken into consideration, in the past due to scarcity of resources we could not find a lot of knowledgeable people. For example, before 40 years the only resource of information was the local channel on the television, and presented limited number of programs like carton programs, a type of movie, and some local and international news. And not every one interesting to know about the previous programs that led to decline in the number of well-informed people. In contrast, nowadays all the recent statistics indicate there is improvement and people more interesting to face more information.
All in all, as I said before due to dynamic and dramatic changes in all the life aspects people have to know a lot of information from different resources to reach higher level of knowledge and to adapt with the life changes in successful manner.
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...with different aspects, you have to get these knowledge from myriad of resources. So, the first...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in contrast, no doubt, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88668555241 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83160028596 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521246458924 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.168779694 48.9658058833 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 143.75 100.406767564 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4166666667 20.6045352989 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4166666667 5.45110844103 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205299548713 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812217554063 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872051050967 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119746688579 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614685354164 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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