Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
What it is happening today is the fact that each more time information is growing up in uncountable ways. From newspapers to magazines or websites there are numerable of them which sometimes drive us to craziness. It is so important as to have only one truthful piece of newspaper where we can find thousands of useful subjects, however it is more important to confront datum from different resources.
Firstly, an engineer cannot rely on a data from a book or a scientific article he/she read about. For example, if he wants to analyze critically, before taking any conclusion, he needs to gather datum from many different articles, study all of them and then he may reach a conclusion.
Secondly, a person should keep updated with what it is happening around the world. For instance, It can be through journals, magazines, newspapers, websites, etc, no matter the source of information because maybe he can take a test to have a better job then a better life later on or he may be tried out to get a promotion. Therefore, with millions of information we can change our life for good and improve the people's life around us who we care.
However, with so many information sometimes is somehow difficult to deal with. We do not the source of it. it lacks in accuracy. As an example, I remember my teacher telling me that he was having difficulty in dealing with math while in university. He tried to fathom the scientific books but it was a hard task to do so only because the notation used. Then, he realized that the problem was not with him but with those books. They were inappropriate translated to english, many into only one.
Finally, The more datum we have on hands the more knowledge we will have to chase what we want for our lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 206, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...nclusion, he needs to gather datum from many different articles, study all of them and then he...
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Line 3, column 413, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...hange our life for good and improve the peoples life around us who we care. However, w...
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Line 4, column 18, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...round us who we care. However, with so many information sometimes is somehow diffic...
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Line 4, column 18, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...round us who we care. However, with so many information sometimes is somehow difficult to deal ...
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Line 4, column 35, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is sometimes
...are. However, with so many information sometimes is somehow difficult to deal with. We do n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63548387097 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70231141668 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3090394398 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8125 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134668931324 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455728068628 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319113178333 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674893443214 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376133880596 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.