With the rapid development of mass media and the emergence of the Internet, information comes handy nowadays. And personally I can not agree more with the statement that in order to get well-informed, people should never only rely on single source of information because no single news resource can guarantee their news are one hundred percent authentic, nor can any of them promise to provide the most detailed and the up to date information all the time.
To begin with, many of the news resources, especially the large TV networks, sometimes provide information with biased opinions or political preference. Sometimes the media have to speak for the best interest for the local government or a specific group of people because for the news industry it is a business after all. So when you watch the local news, it may only tell you one side of the topic that is under hot debate. Yet in order to know the big picture and the whole truth, you need to go to the Internet or read the newspapers to look for different voices on the mater. And afterwards, maybe you will hold a complete different idea about the incident.
Also, in some occasions it is not enough for you to get the information you want from only one news resource. For example, sometimes the newspapers only give a brief introduction about the current affairs that you are very interested in. You may want to know the detailed social background of the event or the impact the incident may bring to the society, and these information can not be found in the newspaper you usually read. And this is the time you turn to other media to get better informed. It is essential for us to be aware of the fact that no single news resource can cover all the things you want to know. And when you can not find what you want, just turn to other media for answers.
Furthermore, different news resources focus on various subjects or aspects of our lives. There are newspapers exclusively report sports events; there are TV news programs that only comment on economic issues and there are news websites mainly explore the topics of art and music. If you only want to take a glimpse of what happens in the current world, then it is fine to just watch the news broadcast for thirty minute every night. However, if you truly want to be well-informed, you have to pay attention to different news resources that enable you have a better and deeper understanding on the things that are going on around us.
Taking the factors I have mentioned above, we can safely conclude that it is better for us to acquire knowledge and get information from as many news sources as possible.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- Many people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money, while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Analyze each viewpoint and take a stand. Give specific reasons for your position. 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
... incident may bring to the society, and these information can not be found in the newspaper you u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, then, well, after all, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2162.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63948497854 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55897306094 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484978540773 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 691.2 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.2650704244 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.111111111 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8888888889 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267557158148 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901437184875 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480821405992 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157423274082 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024407052966 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 10.002688172 205% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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