Today in the modern world the opportunities to get informed are huge. Espicially, via internet it is very easy to reach the information about a recent development is very easy. Although choosing one news source and only check news from there seem quite comfortable, I think that to be well-informed getting news from different sources is much better because of various reasons.
First reason is, the sources that we choose can be biased. For all sources there are some issues that is impossible for that source to be unbiased. Let’s say you are following the news about Ukrain- Russia conflict, if you only follow Russian news sources you can’t be informed well. These sources most probably will provide news from a pro-Russian perspective. For example, if you want to check how many Russian soldiers died in the war, you will find far fewer numbers in Russian sources than actual numbers.
Secondly, especially for hot news, getting information from only one sources can be problematic at the first minute. In such situations, the sources provide all information that they reach without confirming them. For instance, 2 mounts before some big earthquake happened in Turkey. In the first few minutes, a lot of untrue information is published by different news sources. Some people acted according to these sources and after a short period of time, they understand that these news aren’t true.
Last but not the least, in some countries, the freedom of the press is not high and governments have a lot of press on the media. Because of this, there can be a huge amount of self-censorship on journalists or news editors. In such cases, it is not a good idea to focus on news that produced in this country. Besides, it will be a good idea to add at least a foreign news source in sources that it is informed by.
In conclusion, getting news from only one news source is not a good idea because of the reason that I mentioned above. That is why, it is a good idea to differancied the sources according to the events and topics we want to be informed about.
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- TOEFL T P O 24 Integrated Writing Task
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ding to these sources and after a short period of time, they understand that these news aren’t...
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Line 3, column 479, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...rt period of time, they understand that these news aren’t true. Last but not the least, i...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, at least, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76815642458 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67558837163 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488826815642 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.601684099 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8421052632 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8421052632 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330996684067 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112486755505 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07695445529 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208662641566 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522565758718 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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